Blog:A Speech

Friends...brothers... sisters... the guild that you and I have been pursuing is British Black Guard. The Threat. A new life to our country and his majesty King George II. Now with this Guild. securely in our possession, we can begin our recruiting and we will succeed. No matter the cost. No matter the struggle. I will see that our guild will succeed. I'm not just gonna make you rich. I'm not just gonna make you strong. I'm gonna make you the princes of the New World!."

I need some help with my grammar here, thank you!