Talk:The Templar Order/@comment-25856474-20150826021723/@comment-25535643-20150907064430

Fate is determined by fate. I can't even begin to fathom how you manufactured that conclusion. Your philosophies would put down the likes of Nietzsche and Plato. In your attempts to sound highly intelligent, you have in-fact sounded more like a child than I ever thought you would have. The structure of your sentence and words is just so strange and confusing I can barely even make out what you're trying to say. It's a shame I wasted my energy on figuring it out, as in the end what I have found further damaged my mind. I'm not sure if I should just accept that this was written, or try to fight it. What makes this better is that you keep saying "mate" trying to sound more like a pirate. Have you wasted all of the Jack Sparrow quotes? You attempt to emulate his style, but fall flat. It's really not a great style to emulate, even if you did it perfectly you would still look like a complete fool.

Here, let me give you some advice. Ditch your "pirate talk" and start using proper English. You'll come off sounding more intelligent and people will actually listen to what you have to say. If you want to sound like you know anything, you also should stop your idiotic pirate role-playing. I can't really think of anything to say but it makes you sound like an eight year old. You see what others have accomplished in the RP world, and attempt to make yourself seem better. You don't even do it well or realistically. Nobody thinks you're some legendary pirate captain, and nobody thinks you're an Assassin. You could argue that the same thing is happening in this Templar Order, but this page actually has weight to it. There are actual people involved with it, and there is a story being told. Whereas you just try to inflate yourself with air. It has no weight to it. You attempt to look like a lion, but you fail to even resemble a paper tiger. You don't have any power, and you don't even seem threatening.