Talk:Haytham Dane O'Scarlett/@comment-25856474-20170719002926

That was complete and utter rubbish. I understand it was merely a story that was made up but the way you went about it was simply horiffic. There was no charisma in your character nor mine  in that case, (character development was awful). It was a rushed piece of literature where half the vocabulary was improperly used such at "hot shot" a word that was NEVER said back in the 1700s. The ending didnt flow either. Based on this writing and Edward Vultures writing, im starting to believe that this is Edward under a different name, just like Grim and Ishmael (Not that im not saying my bio is anything spectacular) it was like a three year old who's got flu trying to write a story for his or her pass time.